From: "Puppet People" <puppetpeople-AT-nycap.rr.com> To: <puptcrit-AT-puptcrit.org> Date: Tue, 3 Feb 2009 19:19:09 -0500 Subject: Re: [Puptcrit] Narration ~ When and how to Use it.. Nice Narrating Tim. ----- Original Message ----- From: "Tim Giugni" <octorilla-AT-gmail.com> To: <puptcrit-AT-puptcrit.org> Sent: Tuesday, February 03, 2009 6:09 PM Subject: Re: [Puptcrit] Narration ~ When and how to Use it.. > Use narration? > > (He said. Brows narrowing) > > Never! Never use narration. > > (His fork falling to the floor with the force of a spoon.) > > The use of narration is a sign of weakness in your script! > > (Finger pointing heavenward. The voice following. Hand placed gently over > the heart. In some type of ridged prophetic stance.) > > A sign of your weakness as a writer. > > (His voice down turned with remembrances of idiot teachers from past > times. > He took another sip of coffee. ) > _______________________________________________ > List address: puptcrit-AT-puptcrit.org > Admin interface: http://lists.puptcrit.org/mailman/listinfo/puptcrit > Archives: http://www.driftline.org _______________________________________________ List address: puptcrit-AT-puptcrit.org Admin interface: http://lists.puptcrit.org/mailman/listinfo/puptcrit Archives: http://www.driftline.org
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