File puptcrit/puptcrit.0902, message 113


From: "Puppet People" <puppetpeople-AT-nycap.rr.com>
To: <puptcrit-AT-puptcrit.org>
Date: Tue, 3 Feb 2009 19:19:09 -0500
Subject: Re: [Puptcrit] Narration ~ When and how to Use it..


Nice Narrating Tim.


----- Original Message ----- 
From: "Tim Giugni" <octorilla-AT-gmail.com>
To: <puptcrit-AT-puptcrit.org>
Sent: Tuesday, February 03, 2009 6:09 PM
Subject: Re: [Puptcrit] Narration ~ When and how to Use it..


> Use narration?
>
> (He said. Brows narrowing)
>
> Never! Never use narration.
>
> (His fork falling to the floor with the force of a spoon.)
>
> The use of narration is a sign of weakness in your script!
>
> (Finger pointing heavenward. The voice following. Hand placed gently over
> the heart. In some type of ridged prophetic stance.)
>
> A sign of your weakness as a writer.
>
> (His voice down turned with remembrances of idiot teachers from past 
> times.
> He took another sip of coffee. )
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