From: HobgoblinH-AT-aol.com Date: Sun, 6 Sep 2009 11:53:10 EDT To: puptcrit-AT-puptcrit.org Subject: Re: [Puptcrit] Questions about "A Christmas Carol" Non sequiturs -- Journeyng out to the mining country: "An old, old man and woman, with their children and their children's children, and another generation beyond that, all decked out gaily in their holiday attire. The old man, in a voice that seldom rose above the howling of the wind upon the barren waste, was singing them a Christmas song--it had been a very old song when he was a boy--and from time to time they all joined in the chorus." To the lighthouse: "they wished each other Merry Christmas in their can of grog; and one of them: the elder, too, with his face all damaged and scarred with hard weather, as the figure-head of an old ship might be: struck up a sturdy song that was like a Gale in itself." Out over the sea: "every man among them hummed a Christmas tune, or had a Christmas thought, or spoke below his breath to his companion of some bygone Christmas Day, with homeward hopes belonging to it." These are hard sections to sustain for a listening audience. The energy drains away. I could also cut, although I like it well enough, the part in which two people who owed Scrooge money learn he is dead. "To whom will our debt be transferred?" "I don't know. But before that time we shall be ready with the money; and even though we were not, it would be a bad fortune indeed to find so merciless a creditor in his successor. We may sleep to-night with light hearts, Caroline!" As to Rolande's mentioning "The reaction to his transformation various people have -- thinking he's gone looney... Tiny Tim is most discerning." Tiny Tim may be discerning in the movies at the end, but in the book, he is never actually shown reacting to Scrooge's transformation. As to the best illustrated version of the book, I must give the honors to Ronald Searle, who got it dead right. In a message dated 9/6/2009 9:48:10 A.M. Central Daylight Time, puppetpro-AT-aol.com writes: The Nonsequitors? I believe Dickens, writing in an age when forty words were counted better than four, still kept the story fairly spare. Scenes either support character development or plot, or underscore theme. Not sure there is any fat to cut off. >From Robert: I always like Dickens' description of the apartment in which Scrooge lives: "They were a gloomy suit of rooms, in a lowering pile of building up a yard, where it had so little business to be, that one could scarcely help fancying it must have run there when it was a young house, playing at hide-and-seek with other houses, and forgotten the way out again." He brings up a point which is problematic-- should the performer work the narrative voice into the production? The narrator is an intrusive narrator, who continually offers opinions on passing events. It is one of the most charming aspects of the book. Does the performer work it in or not? Examples: "You may talk vaguely about driving a coach-and-six up a good old flight of stairs, or through a bad young Act of Parliament; but I mean to say you might have got a hearse up that staircase" "as close to it as I am now to you, and I am standing in the spirit at your elbow." "As to her, she was worthy to be his partner in every sense of the term. If that's not high praise, tell me higher, and I'll use it." "And yet I should have dearly liked, I own, to have touched her lips; to have questioned her, that she might have opened them; to have looked upon the lashes of her downcast eyes, and never raised a blush; to have let loose waves of hair, an inch of which would be a keepsake beyond price: in short, I should have liked, I do confess, to have had the lightest licence of a child, and yet to have been man enough to know its value." "At last, however, he began to think--as you or I would have thought at first; for it is always the person not in the predicament who knows what ought to have been done in it, and would unquestionably have done it too--at last, I say, he began to think that the source and secret of this ghostly light might be in the adjoining room" "how the lord 'was much about as tall as Peter'; at which Peter pulled up his collars so high that you couldn't have seen his head if you had been there." "If you should happen, by any unlikely chance, to know a man more blest in a laugh than Scrooge's nephew, all I can say is, I should like to know him too. Introduce him to me, and I'll cultivate his acquaintance." "Stop! There was first a game at blind-man's buff. Of course there was. And I no more believe Topper was really blind than I believe he had eyes in his boots. My opinion is, that it was a done thing between him and Scrooge's nephew; and that the Ghost of Christmas Present knew it." Cheers, Alice **************A Good Credit Score is 700 or Above. See yours in just 2 easy steps! (http://pr.atwola.com/promoclk/100126575x1222846709x1201493018/aol?redir=http://www.freecreditreport.com/pm/default.aspx?sc=668072&hmpgID=115&bcd =JulystepsfooterNO115) _______________________________________________ List address: puptcrit-AT-puptcrit.org Admin interface: http://lists.puptcrit.org/mailman/listinfo/puptcrit Archives: http://www.driftline.org
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